Magazine Mock-Up

This is a mock up of my magazine advert which matches the style of my digipak album cover. The silhouette of people will preferably be the two characters from the video laying in the grass. The lighting on this mock up is wrong as it is difficult to read the words at the top, for my real magazine advert I will make the comments at the top bigger so that they're visible. I also think that there are quite a lot of gaps in the poster so maybe adding daisies or other flowers around the edge will fill in the spaces. When making my digipak I will think of the way I have designed this magazine so that they're similar looking and recognisable together.